Wednesday, April 1, 2009

As i see our new haindmaid walk in jealousy fills up inside of me. I know that she can give my husband something i could never give him. And i remind her that i dont want any problems coming from her because the problems will because problems would be retaliated on her aswell. Not only does offred live with us but i also had to hold her hands during the ceronmy while i watch her have sex with my husband! This was too disturbing but i decide to keep quiet.
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  1. AnonymousApril 3, 2009 at 9:48 AM

    Capitalize your "I".

    Insert punctuation: (first sentence) As I see our new handmaid walks in, jealousy fills...

    The third sentence is worded weirdly, you should reword it.

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  2. kelbyreyes123April 3, 2009 at 11:10 AM

    I feel the same way with you. I cant have sex with my husband and i really miss that.

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  3. SalvadorCApril 3, 2009 at 11:18 AM

    Oh im the commander and i could have sexual intercourse while you watch.

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